对联体诗（开阔诗野）

振波浪清

罗志海 发表于 2018-5-16 21:56
是你的对联么？

羽扇摇来三日雨   
键盘敲出五更风——这两句都是我的

罗志海

振波浪清 发表于 2018-5-16 21:59
羽扇摇来三日雨   
键盘敲出五更风——这两句都是我的

明白了

罗志海

永恒的爱

捻一缕心香，远寄云端送朋友
掬三分月色，遥观故里思恋人
感天地保佑，山盟海誓毋见异
期上苍垂怜，石烂江枯不沾尘

注：第一二句罗志海作，第三四句钱永德作。


Eternal Love

Twist a wisp of fragrance of my heart
remotely send to my friends
in the clouds

Hold one-third of the moonlight with both hands
overlook my hometown
think of my sweetheart

Feel that heaven and earth bless us
a solemn pledge of love
don't be strange

Expect God has pity on us
till seas run dry
stones crumble
aren’t stained with dust

Note: first and second sentences by Luo Zhihai.
Third and fourth sentences by Qian Yongde.

5/17/2018对联体 ● 十二绝 罗志海译
Couplet Poem ● Twelve Words of Quatrain
Translation by Luo Zhihai
第5949首对联体诗
The 5,949th Couplet Poem

罗志海

振波浪清 发表于 2018-5-16 21:54
继续来
上山人斫竹   
牵柳岸浮烟   

http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 0-627ab30e98b0.html
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/ ... d-beautiful-lyrics/
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振波浪清

罗志海 发表于 2018-5-18 07:18
永恒的爱

捻一缕心香，远寄云端送朋友

捻一缕心香，远寄云端送朋友:strong:
掬三分月色，遥观故里思恋人:strong:
感天地保佑，山盟海誓毋见异
期上苍垂怜，石烂江枯不沾尘

振波浪清

罗志海 发表于 2018-5-18 08:00
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxiang4291fce5-2fb0-41fd-9d80-627ab30e98b0.html
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景秀詞美

憑欄閣對平湖月
拾步廊伸靜石亭
墨筆生花千古韻:strong:
詩詞寄意百年情:strong:

注：第一二句振波浪清作，第三四句羅志海作。


Pretty Scenery And Beautiful Lyrics

Lean against the railing
the pavilion faces
to the Moon over the Peaceful Lake
The corridor extends
to the Silent Stone Pavilion
steps

The ink brush so pretty
the rhymes through the ages
The poetry and lyrics place on the moods
a hundred years of the feelings

Note: first and second sentences by Zhenbolangqing.
Third and fourth sentences by Luo Zhihai.

5/16/2018對聯體 ● 五絕 羅志海譯
Couplet Poem ● Five Words of Quatrain
Translation by Luo Zhihai
第5954首對聯體詩
The 5,954th Couplet Poem
Luo Zhihai
Topic(s) of this poem: age, beautiful, feeling, ink, lyrics, mood, poetry, rhyme, year

罗志海

林泉 发表于 2018-5-15 01:30
校對：
紫龙岭上，许多游客观日
仄平仄仄，仄平平仄平仄------六言句出律。

雨润花枝俏丽
风亲柳絮轻柔

上面是我写的对联。请林泉诗友写另一联，合成一首对联体诗。
你可愿意？
这副对联，工整，平仄依次顺延，句头，句中及句尾没有三平或三仄。不犯孤平。合律。
要求你的对联，平仄依次顺延，要与我的对联，二三句要粘连。不犯孤平，合律。你能做得到吗？

罗志海

游历

临轩观朗月
拄杖踏高坡
心性河山养
爱情风雨磨

注：第一二句陈轩葵作，第三四句罗志海作。


Travel

Near window
watch the bright moon
Lean on a cane
set foot on a high slope

The wind and rain
grind our love
The country fosters
our temperaments

Note: first and second sentences by Chen Xuankui.
Third and fourth sentences by Luo Zhihai.

5/20/2018对联体 ● 七绝 罗志海译
Couplet Poem ● Seven Words of Quatrain
Translation by Luo Zhihai
第5973首对联体诗
The 5,973th Couplet Poem

振波浪清

罗志海 发表于 2018-5-20 21:32
游历

临轩观朗月

游历

临轩观朗月
拄杖踏高坡
心性河山养:strong:
爱情风雨磨:strong:

注：第一二句陈轩葵作，第三四句罗志海作。

罗志海

振波浪清 发表于 2018-5-16 21:54
继续来
上山人斫竹   
牵柳岸浮烟   

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