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罗志海

扬之水 发表于 2019-1-26 23:48
每次拜读都能有所受益。感谢老师好文！

谢谢诗友关爱!




运行

水尽山穷，孤芳自赏无风度
星移斗转，百舸争流有水平
红霞西落，拜月花童在这里
紫气东来，骑牛老子去何方


Run

The end of hills and rivers
indulge in self-admiration
no demeanor

Changes in the positions of the stars
being accomplished
compete with others

The red clouds down the west
in here the flower children worshipping moon

The purple air comes from the east
where did Lao Tzu riding a cow go to?

1/26/2019格律体新诗 ● 十一绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Eleven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第7757首对联体诗
The 7,757th Two Pairs of Couplets

https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/with-thorns/

扬之水

如果新格律诗在音节、节拍、押韵、平仄、对仗等方面都一致的话，可能最后就相当于基于新韵的长短句了，也可能失去现代诗所具有的特点。

扬之水

拜读学习，问好先生！

罗志海

扬之水 发表于 2019-2-18 23:44
如果新格律诗在音节、节拍、押韵、平仄、对仗等方面都一致的话，可能最后就相当于基于新韵的长短句了，也可 ...

词曲

朵朵飞花留旧韵
潺潺流水咏新歌
春藏兰苑行香子
月挂竹梢忆秦娥


Lyrics And Music

Every flying flowers stayed the old rhymes
The murmuring flowing water played the new music

A moon hanged on the bamboo tip
Thinking of Qin E
The spring hid in the orchid garden
Xing Xiang Zi

3/19/2019格律体新诗 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第8134首对联体诗
The 8,134th Two Pairs of Couplets

https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/the-autumn-rhymes-6/#content

叶秀嫦

欣赏佳作，文笔隽秀，博识豪情、寄意深远。

叶秀嫦

情逸思飘、音韵自成、气畅志远，学习欣赏。

叶秀嫦

认真拜读，感谢老师分享。

扬之水

拜读学习，感受大家学识的深厚！

扬之水

再次拜读学习，受益匪浅！

罗志海

扬之水 发表于 2019-6-2 00:05
再次拜读学习，受益匪浅！

痴情的她

纤指弹空噙热泪
痴情望断恼清秋
心随雁阵逐云远
梦渡银河携月游


She Infatuated

With hot tears in her eyes
two ladyfingers flipped to sky
To overlook the annoying and clear autumn
she infatuated

Her heart followed the flying formation of geese
pursued clouds remotely
She dreamt to ferry the Milky Way
with moon visited

6/1/2019格律体新诗 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第8546首对联体诗
The 8,546th Two Pairs of Couplets

https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/engraves-an-inscriptions/#content